"Fire Emblem: The Burning Brand", Prologue

Yes! I finally finished the prologue of my Fire Emblem Western AU! *does the Snoopy dance*

Any feedback would be greatly appreciated; I've never worked on something so long before... Hopefully I'll have the next chapter up soon, too. (I'll be adding this and all subsequent chapters in my LJ Memories under "FE: Burning Brand".)

( Prologue: Lost in the Wilderness )