"Fire Emblem: The Burning Brand", Chapter 3

*grumbles* I would've posted this earlier, but my significant other decided to do some work in the computer room tonight (I swear, he always manages to do that when I actually feel like writing :/). I hope I didn't miss too much when I looked this over...

And I was really hoping to get the next chapter done by tomorrow, too... (You see, this is kind of my version of Nanowrimo, being the longest thing I've ever written, so far... Though it really doesn't count, since I wrote quite a bit of it before November. ;)P

( Chapter 3: Rounding Up the Posse )